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Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Kazu on Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:49 am

Name - Seniuchi Hayabikou

Age - 87 years old. (He's the posseser of Aoitenma, Making him drain the energy from Aoitenma and making him live for a long time, He still looks like he was 22 years old.)

Rank - Wandering-Nin, Said to be on a Hokage level.

Clan - Seniuchi.

Status - Wandering-Nin just arrived at Konohagakure.

Elements/Abilities - Close combat (Sword mastery, Taijutsu.), Known to be as fast as The Yellow Flash. Also skilled in Katon.

Character Looks - Gray hair, Green eyes, Wearing a robe, has 2 katanas on his back.

Family - Born by unknown parents, Is aware of the Seniuchi living in Konohagakure.

Story.

The Childhood.

Hayabikou was born in Konohagakure by unknown parents. He were born with green eyes, even though all Seniuchi have blue or brown eyes. Already as a child Hayabikou's father gave him a training sword, He started his sword practice at age of 5. When he was 6 years old he joined the ninja acadamy. Already in the ninja acadamy he were as skilled with his sword as Chuunins. When Hayaibikou were 8 he got his first real blade, A shiny blade with "Swift" spelled in Kanji. He trained 2-4 hours every single day on his sword and 1 hour on jutsus. Kids at his school used to call him "Greeneyed" due to his weird shiny green eyes.

Already at 9 years old he got Genin by being very highly skilled. Hayabikou were signed into Team #14 his Jounin was a young 19-20 years old man. At 13 years old he got Naiya Kouseiyouso Tsurugi (The Diamond Elements Sword) a very powerful sword in the Seniuchi clan. Usualy the sword is given to strong Seniuchi members when they turn 18 if they're worthy. Once he got his sword he started to train even more, 3-5 hours a day mostly. He focused on training with his sword and training his speed, then Katon.

Years of hard training he got Chuunin. In the Chuunin exams he almost killed his opponent almost gettind disqualified. At 15 years old, right after graduating he were noticed by a Sage specialising on sword mastery and speed. The Sage offered to train him, Heyabikou accepted. One day Hayabikou started to see images of a demon, Aoitenma. None Seniuchi had ever got that ability, His eye started to bleed sometimes. Every night the image of the demon woke him up, Speaking to him with a dark voice. Hayabikou left his master after 1 year of training and decided to work for money. He assasinated people for money, He basicly did dirtwork. Hayabikou enjoied killing people for money, Training everyday for many hours made him strong as a Jounin. The demon kept telling Hayabikou things, how to use him to paralyse enemies, how to drain energy from him to live longer. At age 22, he left his village un-noticed, people forgot about him. He went out in the forest to train by himself, Earn money by himself and possibly work as a soldier.

There was a war between 2 villages, Hayabikou had just got another Naiya Kouseiyouso Tsurugi sword. He were hired from a general to be in his army. He were in a rather small army of 100 men. As the army saw the enemy army, they charged against them. The enemy army had 200+ men. 50 people in Hayabikou's army died and only killed 40 of their men. Then 50 other died, leaving Hayabikou against 100 men. Hayabikou charged into the group of 100 people, Chopping of heads, arms, legs killing many people in a row. He were badly hurt after killing 50 men but he kept going. After killing 10 more Hayabikou were out of Chakra. The demon started to talk to him, telling him how to drain his chakra, Hayabikou without hesitating started to drain Aoitenma's chakra to use. Now he used powerful Katon jutsus on the group left and chopped off some bodyparts killing the remaining people, 5 escaped. After the dangerous battle, Hayabikou arrived back to the village he was living in, He crawled half of the way. When he arrived he was a hero, all covered in blood and mud he walked down the street with people cheering at him. After living in the village for 10 years working there and such, he left. No-one knows why he left.

Now, Hayabikou is said to be dead, some people still belive he's alive and at Hokage level. He's on his way to Konohagakure for a mission he got from the old Hokage, Seniuchi Seizura.


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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Shira on Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:14 am

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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by WeedSter on Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:30 am

Shira wrote:Rolling Eyes

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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Raikhun on Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:36 am

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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Kazu on Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:09 pm

Read it first. I fixed a few things.. I just wanted to be creative.. Oh well.. Say what's wrong with it so I can fix that.
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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Raikhun on Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:47 pm

Creative is fine, but i never bought the , demon(or w/e it is) makes you live longer. If anything it would be a strain on your body, making you live shorter even.
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Re: Seniuchi Hayabikou (Probably New Character)

Post by Kazu on Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:09 pm

It's the true Aoitenma (Green Demon of the Seniuchi clan) This character was the first Seniuchi to get it. He got the real one. When Seniuchi members make their eyes go from Green/Brown to Green it means they're using Aoitenma as a Doujutsu (Not the real Aoitenma demon, It's some kind of weak form of it.) http://eternity-nrp.forumieren.com/senuichi-f17/seniuchi-history-the-green-demon-eye-t117.htm That one explains it..
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