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Post by HeroxSavior on Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:55 am

~Info~
Name:Timotei Shirosaki
Age:15
Rank:Genin
Team:5
Bloodtype:AB
D.O.B:02.14.94
Birth Village:Yukigakure (Village hidden in the snow)
Current Village:Konohagakure (Village hidden among tree leaves)
Element:Raiton (Lighting)
Clan:Kuriyami
~Family~
Mother:Konota Shirosaki (Deceased)
Age:21
Bloodtype:A
D.O.B:6.17.1988
Death Date:Unknown
Rank:Jounin
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Father:Shino Shirosaki (Deceased)
Age:26
Bloodtype:B
D.O.B:12.29.1983
Death Date:Unknown
Rank:Anbu
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Half Brother:Uchiha "Ao" Torfune (Nii-Sama)
Age: Somewhere around 20
Bloodtype:???
D.O.B:11.12.????
Rank:Jounin
Clan:Uchiha

~Backround~

Timotei Shirosaki born in Yukigakure had a some what tough life.With his mother's
death lost in a mission Timotei was not aware of her death. Growing up under his father who was always out on missions with his half brother Torfune.Kids,adults and everyone in his village didn't like Timotei because of his claim smile.He always smiled when he was cursed at and beaten up at times. At age 5 his father has expirementing cruse seals that he had learn from a unclassified nin.Given this power he has place 2 curse seals on two villagers. Timotei Shirosaki was chosen to a less harsh seal that wouldn't kill him but his father. The murdering of his father Timotei was kicked out of Yukigakure only to return with Torfune. His half brother is still remained missing.

Timotei traveled arcossed the sea to come across Getsugakure. The village hidden under the moon. Timotei was taken in by the king of the Crescent Moon Kingdom.At age 9 Timotei was well like and had a pretty good life at the kingdom until, the king's son Okionomi was inraged. The jealous son toke Timotei and shipped him to the nearest land. He was announced dead to the people.He was shipped to Kirigakure. An old man named Tazuna,currently working on a village project took the liberty on taking in Timotei for 4 years.

He made a group of friends but names are not important. on his leaving day to the road of Konoha,he was given headbands from all the villages he lived in even his birth village. With his hopes raised high he set off to Konohagakure. With his lack of direction to Konohagakure he ended up in Sunagakure. Pissed off to the uter most he still smiled and lived in Sunagakure for a year. Timotei Shirosaki has learned the arts of the justu and the way of the ninja. He finally found out about the headband's meaning.Determind, Timotei says good bye to his old friends at Sunagakure and finally embarked to Konohagakure. He ran into Ketsuki Aiko,A ninja who shown Timotei's element which is the spark of the lighting.2 days past and Timotei has finally reached his goal. Konohagakure his new light in his life. Now under the teachings of "ichi" and his team mate Sung. 2 more days later Timotei has found his half brother Torfune .

~Bringing Back Sung Arc~

Timotei now is now chasing after his good friend Sung who currently ran away from the village.When he ran into Sung in the forest, Timotei gotten angry and attacked Sung in inragement. Sung quickly explained why he left the village so Timotei wouldn't be so angry.With sadness, Timotei says his goodbyes to his good friend as he went of into the dark world. He fell back and just watched the sky as it began to rain.Now his sensei,and best friend are gone forever. Saddness...

A month later Timotei runs into his friend Sung yet again. Surprised to see him he happliy greets him as Sung looking rather shocked. He met Sung again coming out of sand at the pond, seeming to be practicing his suiton. Timotei sat with Sung and talked about how things are and what not. Sung told him he would be hunted down by him one day. But Timotei thinking to himself that he will never have enough power to kill his only friend. Sunndenly, the seal on Timotei chest broke out.The thought of killing his only friend made him unleashed his dark persona. Shirosaki Omarurra.A devilish insane side of Timotei. With his evil laugh causes fear inside Sung."What are you!?" yelled Sung as he quickly excuted his spike amor made of earth. Omarurra just laughed,"No one you need to know!". He rushed in and punched right through Sung's armor unhurt. Sung jump back and reached for his sword but Omarurra already was behind him with such speed. Sung thought to himself "Fuck" as he was elbowed in the face by Omarurra.Sung fell back into the water hurt as Omarurra laughed and grew more powerful by the second.Sung said to him "What happened to Timotei!?". "Dont you reconized me? This is Timotei!" said Omarurra said when he ran in for the last blow. He stopped."BEGONE!" said the voice inside Omarurra. Omarurra grabbed his head yelled while he laughed. "This isnt over!!!" as he said screaming while dissappearing. Timotei laid knocked out on the ground while Sung took care of him while he recovered. Power...

Timotei learned of his old friend Sung's hideout.With Determination Timotei went as fast as he could so Sung wouldnt get away. When he got there he found Sung looking up at the clouds predicting rain. "SUNG!!!" shouted Timotei with a angry voice. Not surpirsed Sung turned around and saw Timotei. "Still following me? Your such a fool" said Sung not impressed."Im tired of repeating myself sung! come back to the village now!" Timotei shouted.Scilence filled the air as it began to rain."If i kill you i will become even stronger than i am now" Sung said making a fist. Sung made it rain harder and he formed a tidal wave."No more holding back Tmotei!!!! YOU END HAS COME!!" He made 24 hand-seals in 2 seconds. SUITON:ZINGDOLKE!! (Meaning Tidal wave). Timotei looking up to a colossal tidal wave crashing down on him said to himself "Chidori.." and used it to go right through the tidal wave. Sung shocked with such power shown took out his shark sword. Timotei jumped up at him and attacked him head on. Sung just blocked it and kicked him up into the air.Flown into the air Sung comes up and tries to slam him back down to earth. Timotei moved out the way and kick him down to the ground only for him to land. Sung impressed he uses one of his deadly jutsu. He fused his Doton and Suiton to create Mokoton."Its Over!!" Sung shouted at Timotei. Timotei Cruseseal was broken and he gave off abnormal power. Timotei lifted his and as the lightning came down upon it. Sung jumped up and yelled"TIMOTEI!!!!". Timotei dove down at him shouting"SUNG!!!!". "DOSUI RASENGAN!!" "MOKUHYOU CHIDORI" (Mokukyou means Annihilating). The impact of these two forces was so great the sound barrier was broken,the forest set on fire, everything around them in a 20 mile area died. Sung's arm went through Timotei's chest but He smiled and scared his neck. Timotei falling and turning back to normal, his darkness turned into a sword in his hand. Sung out of breath looked around in amazement what damage they have done to the area. He ran off and he was never seen again. Gone...

~Finding Nii-Sama Arc~

After Timotei recovered from his wounds and somehow had a full recovery has left. Timotei has traveled to the hidden grass vilage. Reason on doing so was to find his half-brother Torfune.Since he has no sensei he just got up and left leaf for the time being.Hoping to find his brother he came arcossed a sage who has move to grass with his little brother.His name is Shouten Herutsu.The sage saw him a welcomed him to the village.He also asked a favor to get a few things for him. Timotei took out his wallet checking how much money he had left. Herutsu just left and told him they are raw material."Gather some bamboo,wood, and a Tokubetsu rock.". Tokubetsu meaning Special so its hard to find in your local forest. Timotei worte down the materials and went off.While in the forest Timotei encountered a Mssing Nin."Have you seen a rock around here?" he said with no harm. Shirosaki just looked at him and past him.The missing nin pretended to run of and came back to spy on Timotei. Once he found the rock the nin attacked Tim with Grandfire ball jutsu. Timotei turned around and sliced the fire with his sword thus countering it. The nin jumped at him with a punch but he dodge the punch and fliped him over the edge of the cliff. Looking down over the cliff Timotei's voice echo "You underestimated me" and ran back to the sage.The sage questioned why his blade was so badly damaged."When i countered this jutsu it must off got screwed up" Timotei said putting it away.Herutsu took it offering to fix it for 600 ryo.A fair price to pay for repair."Thank you" said Timotei as he was giving him the money."You wont be dissapointed when u come back tomorrow" said Herutsu smiling and going back in.


Last edited by HeroxSavior on Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:33 pm; edited 17 times in total (Reason for editing : New Rp)
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by WeedSter on Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:26 pm

No, just no, go die, no Uchiha's, all dead now, period.

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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Raikhun on Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:44 pm

amazing its his first post xd
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Tsugaru on Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:22 pm

WeedSter wrote:No, just no, go die, no Uchiha's, all dead now, period.
Yes.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Kazu on Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:13 pm

HeroxSavior wrote:
Clan:Seeking Uchiha

Uchiha's are born in the clan, you can't just join Uchiha. If you want to be an Uchiha you'll have to make another character. Uchiha's ain't really popular on this server.. so you should probably try another clan. The Uchiha stuff.. Please delete it.. And Don't Use A Big Letter In Every Word, It's annoying. Update it a little bit and keep working on your story etc.. Says you came to the village as 16 years old.. Still Genin.. Genins normally are from age 12-15 or so.. 16 is more Chuunin.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Raikhun on Wed Dec 30, 2009 2:06 am

Kazu wrote:
HeroxSavior wrote:
Clan:Seeking Uchiha

Uchiha's are born in the clan, you can't just join Uchiha. If you want to be an Uchiha you'll have to make another character. Uchiha's ain't really popular on this server.. so you should probably try another clan. The Uchiha stuff.. Please delete it.. And Don't Use A Big Letter In Every Word, It's annoying. Update it a little bit and keep working on your story etc.. Says you came to the village as 16 years old.. Still Genin.. Genins normally are from age 12-15 or so.. 16 is more Chuunin.

Wrong, as seen in the chuunin exams shown in the eps 40-60, there are genins even over 20, you just have to pass the test. you fail.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Izuna on Wed Dec 30, 2009 2:08 am

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|---THAT YOU HOE!



Kazu wrote:
HeroxSavior wrote:
Clan:Seeking Uchiha

Uchiha's are born in the clan, you can't just join Uchiha. If you want to be an Uchiha you'll have to make another character. Uchiha's ain't really popular on this server.. so you should probably try another clan. The Uchiha stuff.. Please delete it.. And Don't Use A Big Letter In Every Word, It's annoying. Update it a little bit and keep working on your story etc.. Says you came to the village as 16 years old.. Still Genin.. Genins normally are from age 12-15 or so.. 16 is more Chuunin.

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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Kazu on Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:13 am

Still fails WEHEHEHE :3
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Raikhun on Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:26 am

you sure do.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Kazu on Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:55 pm

No you Raikhun, No you.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Izuna on Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:08 pm

WHERE IS AO IN THAT STOREH?!!!?!

KEEEELLL!

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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Raikhun on Wed Dec 30, 2009 6:07 pm

he jounin nao? oh lawd o:, Raiton though, rawr ;3
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Kazu on Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:12 pm

is my name in there? Very Happy
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Tsugaru on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:31 pm

HeroxSavior wrote:~Info~
Name:Timotei Shirosaki
Age:15
Rank:Genin
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Rank:Jounin
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I spy with my little eye...
FAIL.
you did your rank twice.
And you're not a jounin.

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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by HeroxSavior on Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:37 pm

Tsugaru wrote:
HeroxSavior wrote:~Info~
Name:Timotei Shirosaki
Age:15
Rank:Genin
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Rank:Jounin
..

I spy with my little eye...
FAIL.
you did your rank twice.
And you're not a jounin.



Timotei Shirosaki

~Info~
Name:Timotei Shirosaki
Age:15
Rank:Genin (my rank)
Team:5
Bloodtype:AB
D.O.B:02.14.94
Birth Village:Yukigakure (Village hidden in the snow)
Current Village:Konohagakure (Village hidden among tree leaves)
Element:Raiton (Lighting)
Clan:N/A
~Family~ (New Bio)
Mother:Konota Shirosaki (Deceased)
Age:21
Bloodtype:A
D.O.B:6.17.1988
Death Date:Unknown
Rank:Jounin (not my rank)

idk where u got me as rank jounin
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by Raikhun on Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:12 pm

my bad, i find your app still highly confusing then.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by HeroxSavior on Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:09 am

I hope you can understand it now ive edited parts and added to Very Happy
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Post by Kazu on Mon Jan 25, 2010 4:07 pm

Aaaah kewl.
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by HeroxSavior on Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:45 pm

You liked it? O.o
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by HeroxSavior on Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:53 am

yay! second most veiwed profile!! ^^
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Post by Kazu on Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:17 pm

no 1337 clicking pl0x. x3
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Re: Timotei Shirosaki (Edited)

Post by HeroxSavior on Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:08 pm

Lol Lucky Star XD thats where i got the name since my name is really tim Razz
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