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Post by Absolut on Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:46 am

Maikeru is 22 aged ninja who lost his memory. all he remembers about his past is a bloodshed in a little village somwhere, after losting his memory he have journied around the globe searching for answers about his past. He started to see nightmares one year after losing his memory and now his psychical condition is little strange, illusions etc.
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Post by TheHandSeal on Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:25 am

Could use a ton more detail sadly.Mine wasn't great honestly but this could use more detail in my opinion,
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Post by Izuna on Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:09 pm

Absolut wrote:Maikeru is 22 aged ninja who lost his memory. all he remembers about his past is a bloodshed in a little village somwhere, after losting his memory he have journied around the globe searching for answers about his past. He started to see nightmares one year after losing his memory and now his psychical condition is little strange, illusions etc.
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Seems like copypasta..

Born in a poor village....lost memory....whole clan died due to massacre....became emo.....Uri Geller making up Illusions in yoh mind...


dude make a better profile srsly now.

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Re: Maikeru Hakyo

Post by Vlad Yoshi on Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:24 pm

Agreed Izuna
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo

Post by Shira on Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:15 am

How about you guys shut the fuck up and give some HELPFUL criticism, rather than ranting.
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo

Post by Raikhun on Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:24 am

Want constructive criticism?

Stop making up emo stories and your clan is dead, bohooo, we had 500 kiddies like that, yes it gets annoying.

How hard is it to be a damn normal ninja, whose family is still alive. had normal grades in academy, wtf is wrong with being normal, shit.
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Post by Kazu on Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:44 am

Well.. Not very creative, you should write more.. It's a little bit short. But I guess you're gonna add more when you start RPing more stuff uh?
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo

Post by Izuna on Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:51 pm

Raikhun wrote:Want constructive criticism?

Stop making up emo stories and your clan is dead, bohooo, we had 500 kiddies like that, yes it gets annoying.

How hard is it to be a damn normal ninja, whose family is still alive. had normal grades in academy, wtf is wrong with being normal, shit.

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